Comments on I'M ON YOUR COMPUTER: STREET JUSTICE: THE MUSICAL

Dear AnonymousYou have made possibly the most awes...

2007-06-08T09:39:00.000-07:00

Dear Anonymous

You have made possibly the most awesome suggestion ever, on this web page. When the band fires up, at full fucking tilt, it's like the Hammer of Thor has struck.

Kind Regards,

Dear IOYCYou give us faith that Ansatsuken style w...

2007-06-08T09:17:00.000-07:00

Dear IOYC

You give us faith that Ansatsuken style will never die.

Yours Faithfully with Your Faith,

Capcomptroller of True Metal

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2007-05-30T23:52:00.000-07:00

Dear Anonymous,

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Kind Regards,

SHORYUKEN!

2007-05-30T23:34:00.000-07:00

SHORYUKEN!

Don't make me beg.

2007-05-30T20:00:00.000-07:00

Don't make me beg.

Can you update please? Life is starting to lose it...

2007-05-28T22:57:00.000-07:00

Can you update please? Life is starting to lose its meaning.

HADOKEN!

2007-05-28T21:20:00.000-07:00

HADOKEN!

I am interested to see how The Author is coping wi...

2007-05-20T19:43:00.000-07:00

I am interested to see how The Author is coping with the clear success of this draft.

No doubt there are some seriously Warm Cockles.

This blog is getting better every time I look at i...

2007-05-17T19:45:00.000-07:00

This blog is getting better every time I look at it.

i am laughing so hard i am having trouble breathin...

2007-05-15T22:48:00.000-07:00

i am laughing so hard i am having trouble breathing/not peeing.
- maya

There should be a new term invented to describe th...

2007-05-15T22:39:00.000-07:00

There should be a new term invented to describe the snort laughing caused by the reading of computers which you are on.

Sounds like a pretty good start. What's a musical?...

2007-05-15T22:04:00.000-07:00

Sounds like a pretty good start.

What's a musical?

IOYC,May I humbly suggest some suggestions?I will ...

2007-05-15T20:15:00.000-07:00

IOYC,

May I humbly suggest some suggestions?

I will assume "yes" and continue by suggesting them.

As it stands, your musical needs to be longer - I don't think I would pay any money to see this on Broadway or at Covent Garden, and if incorporated into a Bollywood film it would detract from the overall experience and I may not rent the DVD until $2 Tuesdays.

More scenes should be added with a Massive Final Twist in mind, e.g. sworn enemies Colin and Corey T-F turn out to be half-brothers. This would result in audience members leaving the theatre thinking: "So, while trying to upset Corey, Colin only managed to ruin his own family? What then, is the nature of Street Justice anyway? Can real Justice therefore be administered by the Streets? etc."

Clue to the Massive Final Twist should be given at about the 63% mark of the musical, when it is revealed that Colin's family name is "Fingers". Audience (if not too stupid) is supposed to notice the connection between family names "Twenty-Fingers" and "Fingers", suggesting the possibility of them having the same father. Timing and delivery of Clue obviously depends on anticipated stupidity of audience.

Apologies if you and your muse had already planned for this. Keep up the good work - Bollywood needs you.